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             I got my book report back in today’s class. Rab gave me some feedback about my report and mistakes that I made. Many of the mistakes were basic ones, which make me think that I should check my report more carefully before I submit. The bad habit that I often do in my essay is to use “I” too many times. I do this mistake from my high school. I always try not to do use “I” often in my essay, but it is difficult for me to do this. The next essay will be longer and more argumentative I hope. This means I should be using more references.
            In the discussion we did today, we talked about our own perceptions about being am adult or a child. Most of the group members said that they think them selves as a child.  I also think that I am not mature enough to be an adult, because I do not earn money and pay tuition by my own. However, whether the people make money only by them selves and live by their own or not are not the only factor to be an adult. To be an adult, we should have mature ways of thinking. To be able to think others, do not believe everything and always tries to know the truths are good example for me to describe mature person.

            Now, it is time for me to working on my essay. Since Rab told us that no matter when is the deadline, we should already start writing our essay, I hope I can be a real university student from this semester.